Late Night Studies

I have to say that I enjoy the way you set up the room. You have the clock in the background on the wall, the bookshelf below it, and the window to the left of them. The placement of objects really makes it feel like I’ve entered an actual office. I also kind of admire the apathetic look Sunset Shimmer gives, indicating that she has no motivation to get this studying done. Now I do have some criticisms to make. Firstly, I feel like there is too much light shone on Sunset’s face. Either tone down the light on her face, or turn up the light being emitted from the lamp. Next, I would have the camera at a normal tilt rather than a slanted one, because there’s nothing off-putting about the scene. Lastly, perhaps you could zoom out a bit, so that we have a better sense as to what the room is like. Other than that, this picture is pretty serviceable. The setup of the room is pretty nice, and it does capture what it’s like to be studying late at night. Overall, I like it. Keep up the great work, TheWhitePone!